The lover and the smartphone comment on the use of poetry
Don’t talk I love it when you Rub your finger over my face Fumble with my buttons Reach for me day and night Laugh at so many silly nothings It’s awful when you Switch off Ignore me Take out a pencil Write poetry For goodness’ sake Instead of gazing at me For goodness’ sake Write poetry Take out a pencil Ignore me Switch off It’s awful when you Laugh at so many silly nothings Reach for me day and night Fumble with my buttons Rub your finger over my face I love it when you Don’t talk
Brilliant Gill!
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Steady on!
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clever structure Gill. Engaging and so true!
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Fun to do….. for weeks !
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It’s hard to write a palindrome,Gill, but you’ve cracked it! Good stuff.
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Yeah but it doesn’t rhyme so shouldn’t be allowed!
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I hardly dare reply with my device now that you’ve made me think about it’s feelings!
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I hope it will be OK with good causes!
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I like it cos it says something.Face?Sent from my iPhone
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Praise indeed! Thank you – that’s very gratifying
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Love this Gill!
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Great! I didn’t think anyone would get it
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Love comments
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